Is the start of my story any good?

:) It's great. Absolutely. I'm 11 too, and I love writing too. How many years have you been writing? I just started when I was 10. My friends say I'm a good writer. I don't think I've beaten this before. It's... wow. Amazing for someone my age. I love the idea. Overall, you have great potential. Please check out some of my questions too.